mtutaj Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 Here is something that I've been working on.. its my second project using Max. I am working on 12 other views of the rest of the space. Tell me what you think. Mike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[WR]JeFf Posted March 13, 2004 Share Posted March 13, 2004 Very nice work! I like the curtain very much! But I think that the light isn't much detailled... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victor Erthal Posted March 14, 2004 Share Posted March 14, 2004 HI there! That blue volume with light has some texturing problems, it is repeating a lot and the mapping seems not to be correct on the side. You need some more faces ons you luminaire in the center of the image, as well as in the border of the blue volume. There are some very dark areas in your image, if youre not using radiosity or GI try to tone down a little bit the saddow density. The carpet is oversaturated and the concrete texture in the floor seems too big. BTW great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted March 15, 2004 Share Posted March 15, 2004 Hi! The image is matching the space, I believe. The one thing that bothers me is that it's really blured. I don't know if it's JPEG compression or whatever, but you could benefit of a sharper image. [] Rick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muzzy Posted March 15, 2004 Share Posted March 15, 2004 Hi, I think for a second max project, it is very nice. Looks like the scale of the hanging light or something is too big. Either a scale problem or goes down too much. I can hit my head easily. Also I didin't like the color of it, (IMO) may be cream better. Second one third of your image , I see your curtain, do you want to highlight the curtain or your design Shifting you camera angle to the left, will show less curtain and more design. Last thing is, if your carpet is too brigt and top of your chairs too. Also aggree with Rick about blur Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtutaj Posted March 16, 2004 Author Share Posted March 16, 2004 First off. Thanks for the comments. The lantern is the size the designer wants it.. Its huge, like over 3' tall its also supposed to be brass.. One of the other 11 views will be of the curtain, and of course, the location and style has changed on me today. the fuzzyness I think is due to the .jpg.. I know the higher res .tiff is really sharp. I will turn down the light in the lantern. I think I have too many lumens from that.. I will post some more once I get them done.. Thanks, again Mike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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