House Exterior

[Da_RoCk]

Hello everyone... im currently working on this. im in the post process stage. Anyhow, any c&c is welcomed.... thank you very much.

[jucaro]

Thats a very big leap from your previous works. Defintely much better. But there's still plenty more room to improve the image though. Like, the trees and the grass and the foreground shrubs could you some variation.

 

And also, you might want to lower the extrusion on the slabs of the walk path, they look over scaled and out of proportion. Technical-wise, your skill with vray is there already.

 

Cheers! And congratulations on your graduation pare!

[voltaire_ira]

hey mr. R.A.,

 

good work on your post.

 

some comments:

1. try to add shadow casting trees or gobos(is the term right?) behind the camera so the shadows can be seen on your foreground.

2.try to check the shadows of your palm trees if they're consistent with the overall direction of your shadows.

3.overall...you did a good job!

 

congratulations for gradutaing B.s. Archi-torture! asa ta kaon bay?

[Da_RoCk]

Thanks for the thanks for the crits. ill keep that in mind.

[demo38]

My only crit would be the stone columns, the stone portion seems small to the rest above them; maybe consider giving some more weight to the stone parts (bigger).