-Kitchen by Alicja-

[Alicja]

hi

my max3d finished his work five minutes ago. I see some mistakes..but it is first rendering

 

Alicja

[Crazy Homeless Guy]

as always, your sleek modern designs are always nice, but the reason you post to the board is to get feedback...

 

...the wood teture on the left is tiling. the sun seems like it is coming from the left and the right. your table has some functional issues. even if you are built like a supermodel, i am guessing that you legs will not fit between the seats, and the bottom of the table. maybe you can tint the incadescent bulbs slightly yellow so the have a different feel than the sun. the jet black is nice, but i would like to see a little depth in the surface style. it is the same shade on all faces. maybe add a some specular reflection to it.

[Alicja]

crazy homeless guy-thank YOU for comment ))

 

this is my update..I'm working..hard working..

[wsneto]

Alicja,

 

I think that you have too much light in your scene, mostly at the white chairs, they´re too white. If you´re using halogen lamps, the light color should be more yellow.

 

Very nice work

[Alicja]

ohhh, I hate yellow, I hate yellow lamps I don't like yellow colour on the wood table.

thanks

 

Alicja

[rivoli]

it looks a bit overexposed to me. it wouldn't be a problem in itself, but the image is flat in a way as if it was washed out. it does not seem as good as the other ones you posted, i think it needs more work on lighting. the first one is much better from this point of view.

[Fran]

Hi Alicja,

 

It's lovely. If you reduce the reflectance value of the floor (the amount of light reflected, not shinyness), that might tone the lighting down enough for a better exposure balance. Also, as Travis mentioned. The table is too low for the height of the chair seats.