giraffe Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 hi the architecural design ,s not mine. I need your critiques about the rendering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Matthews Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 It looks nice. There are a few issues though. There seems to be a contrast issue between the building and the ground. The building is too bright. Secondly, There are no shadows cast by tress, bushes, building, etc. on the ground. I like the water, but the reflections are strange. Flat on onside choppy on the other. The view that you are using does not concentrate focus on anything in particular. Try lowering the camera and looking up. The trees look to bright. What programs are you using, and what are your settings? Repost with settings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 Your background horizon does not match the view. The building is not necessarily too bright, but you need consistent contrast in the whole picture. The sky could be much darker, or lighten the grass for lower contrast if that's what you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted April 17, 2004 Author Share Posted April 17, 2004 thank you very much for quick feedback I use 3dsmax6 and vray. I will take care of the tree-shadow problem in the update. about the water: I dont know why those wird reflections happen. but today I am working on the water element and will send an update. about the contrast: Ernest I understand what you tre to say. when you mention about making the glass lighter, should I put another light in the scene only illuminating the grass? I dont know why this happens. some areas are too bright while some are dark.I dont know how to handle this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted April 17, 2004 Author Share Posted April 17, 2004 here is a quick update... please disregard the alias problem because it is a test render. I still dont have the shadows for trees-I dont know why. I must work more to solve that. I made changes for the water element too. what about the contrast problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chad Warner Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 Theres still something a little bit off with the contrast. I think that with the building that bright, your shadows wouldn't be quite so bright. The reason the trees aren't casting shadows is because the RPC's are essentially planes, so the "face" of the rpc is facing the camera, and the thin side of the plane is facing the light, so no shadow. If you move your light to be in line with the camera, you will get a shadow. Otherwise, you have to fake it with a projector light (check ouy RPCnet.com for a tutorial). -Chad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted April 18, 2004 Author Share Posted April 18, 2004 chad- do you mean my shadows should be darker? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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