jucaro Posted May 9, 2004 Share Posted May 9, 2004 This is a facade for a memorial chapel. Its just part of a series of animations we're working on. I'd like to get your comments and tips to further improve the quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran Posted May 9, 2004 Share Posted May 9, 2004 Gee, that guy just doesn't care where he loiters does he? He's way out of place in this setting, and so is the red sports car. Looks like the lady has already cashed in the insurance policy. Maybe a more conservative vehicle. The lady actually looks appropriate. Other than the car and the guy, I really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graphix Posted May 9, 2004 Share Posted May 9, 2004 Going to have to agree with fran on the car and the man. Also the distance between the facade and the car seems too narrow to be a drive. The bright bright bright yellow car stop stands out too much as well. graphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
voltaire_ira Posted May 10, 2004 Share Posted May 10, 2004 Jucaro, Here's the revised exterior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted May 10, 2004 Share Posted May 10, 2004 Id lose the signage and car stop things. They dont promote your building. The facade stands up for itself well and doesnt need the distractions. Look out for the tiling on the concrete near the front of the image. Looking good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graphix Posted May 10, 2004 Share Posted May 10, 2004 I would agree.... loose the sign and the car stops. What is the guy in the purplish shirt looking at? I would probably loose all the people that are standing in the parking spaces. You have a driveway to nowhere to the left of the image. Just a touch of work on the texture of the parking lot and you are set. looks very good. graphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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