Archmage Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Hi. Another Single Residential Brief: Colourfull This is the front side so long. I have posted before and after pic. Gonna send it to the client now so that he may get his 50 cents worth and change what he wants. Will start with the back in mean while. Sorry about the quality of the visualisation, i had to compress it quite allot. C&C welcome. - May not change architecture. Have a naas day peeps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Nice work. Good composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Very nice work. The sun angle is different on the trees and the new stuff, but its not going to be noticed by most people, just picky ones like me. The overall color and light are really pleasing. On the driveway, the gray border material appears to sit above the field color (probably how you modeled it) and that is distracting. The street could be darker to anchor the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graphix Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 Well done composting. The only other thing I would have to add to what has been said is that I would like to see the rest of the building, looks like you cropped off the left hand side. graphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archmage Posted May 18, 2004 Author Share Posted May 18, 2004 Thanx for the advice guys. Good point about the making the road darker Ernie. And the grey trim was irretating me too. Unfortunately I had to crop it like tha graphix (coz of the photograph and large tree in front). I will post the back tomorow which will give more info of the building. Thanx guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sunet Posted May 18, 2004 Share Posted May 18, 2004 On the driveway, the gray border material appears to sit above the field color (probably how you modeled it) and that is distracting. Turning cast shadow off on the grey material might help. just my 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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