matt_vinoir Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 hello again, this is part of my thesis, some of which i posted below about the micro brewery. i wanted to go for quite a moody look. took out most of the saturation in ps. and c&c welcome as always! this is very much in the process of changing so feel free with any thing! LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xgarcia Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 It looks great so far Matt. Watch out for the tiling in the grass between the ghost people and the building. Personally, I would also like to see the trees slightly ghosted along with the people. Try that and see what it looks like. Excellent modelling and textures! I also like the design - reminds me of a project I saw in Germany - aparptment housing with these shutter-walls on the exterior. Watch out for "vertical" verticals! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matt_vinoir Posted May 19, 2004 Author Share Posted May 19, 2004 hehe that will have mark chuckling! i wanted a real simple clean building i took inspiration from a herzon and de meuron building in germany called funf hof in munich. they used a metal mesh shutter. that is probably the one you are thinking about! good idea about the trees, something i will do right now! cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiny Piney Posted May 19, 2004 Share Posted May 19, 2004 The whole scene seems a little dark. If you use the squint test you notice that there is more concentration on the foreground and less on the building. You should not have to strain to read the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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