choochee Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 This is another residential building we're rendering now as part of the design proccess. c&c ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigcahunak Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 Yosef, I must say its getting better all the time. Few things I didn't like here: - Sky looks too big to me - Shadows on the building doesnt fit the car's, which doesn't fit the ppl's, which doesn't fit the tree's... - I dont like those bushes in between the buildings climbing all the way to 3rd floor. Also their shadow on the building should be softer and blurier. - This car in front of the house looks like a small toy - I'd remove it. The transperancy on the middle of the building on the left looks weird. -Dont like "Azrieli" in the background - we know what it is, but it gives an Industrial feeling. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted June 16, 2004 Share Posted June 16, 2004 i agree with the above comments on the shadow orientation. also, and more important imo, the rendering looks extremely flat and contrast-less. those shadows need to be darker. much darker. it looks too much like a scanlined render as it stands. a much great contrast between light and dark areas needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
choochee Posted June 16, 2004 Author Share Posted June 16, 2004 oops, didn't noticed the shadow orientions.... I also like more contrast, I'm gonna try it. btw BigK, the bldg is gonna be very close to the industrial area... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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