My Fantastic Place

[helenistikyay]

this is my last personal work

i hope you like it

 

and any c&c are welcomed

3dsmax + vray + ps

[Jason Matthews]

Looks great. The only real crit I have is that there is not enough contrast. There may be too much GI in the scene which is drowning out all of the shadows. The glare is a bit strong which may be adding to this effect.

[helenistikyay]

thansk for reply

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[aristocratic3d]

I really liked the first one with photoshop edit

[Jason Matthews]

Maybe just week the PS version to have a bit more contrast. I do like the feel though.

[ruskie77]

love it!

 

how did you do your ivy and grass? they look great.

 

I agree on the contrast issue too.

 

also the arches and rock appear to be cut a bit too surgically.. add a tiny bit of noise-bump to the rocky outcrop and roughen up the arch ends..

 

 

also... if I'm being hyper-critical... compared to the ivy leaves, your bricks are too small (in my opinion) they look like lego sized bricks, but if this the effect you're after, I think it's very good.

 

oh yeah, one last thing... a very tiny bit of DOF and a very subtle bit of chromatic abboration (cyan fringing) would add the photo realism, but go easy on these!