exterior-weekend apartments

[giraffe]

I would like to hear your C&C, advises about my work

I am not related to architecural design but have done only cg part.

[STRAT]

very nice.

 

i'd like to see the shadows a bit darker and the general lighting more contrasted, and also the stone material tiles too much, but pleasing all the same

[mbr]

Really nice. The pool is great! A few things, but minor:

 

1. Something about the stone doesn't feel '3D'.

2. The trees and grass look so dark. It's almost 'stylized', but I wonder if it goes too far into the less saturated green look. Could be just me, as I tend to like a lot of bright colors.

 

Looks really nice, though, and those are nit picking. I really like that water!

 

Good work.

[Ernest Burden III]

The framing is too tight. It hits the chimney on the upper right, and closes in on the left edge of the building. Open the view up, show a little more sky and a lot more of the area in front of your main elevation--the building has nowhere to go.

[giraffe]

thanks for all replies

 

strat: I will try to darken shadows as you say. but this place is hot humid place so I really dont know if it is better to darken shadows. anyway I will do both send the updates so we can decide about shadows all together in the forum

 

@mbr:thanks- I agree about the stone I even used displacement but still it is flat.I will try my best to achieve a better look.

 

@mark: thanks I already shared this water material on http://www.evermotion.org - you can find it on the free stuff.

 

@ernest: thank you very much about your comments. they really mean a lot to me because I really learn a lot from you about compositioning. I will try to manage what you say.

 

I will send the updates.

thank you all for feedback:)

[giraffe]

hi again-I am sorry for posting late.

here is the update

and strat I have a more contrast version for you

[giraffe]

and here is a night view