bedroom night view

[yosa_b]

hi guys, this is an image of a bedroom done with final render stage-1, i am trying to reduce the color bleeding by reducing the color bleeding value to 0 but nothing much happened, and i used an advanced fr material for the carpet and reduced the send value and not much happend, help me plz.

[Ernest Burden III]

The color bleeding is fine. In fact, the whole picture is quite nice.

 

Keep the view, it is nailed, although I would personally want to correct the verticals, you may be of the other camp.

 

The wall art, left, is distracting as a realistic picture. I don't know if you are trying to work an Islamic feel, but typically Islamic art is non-representational.

 

Why the fallen vase/water jar in the corner? It would be much more elegant to have just the one in the stand.

 

The lamp shades look flat and oddly transparent, better to just make them a basic white, even if you have to do this in Photoshop. Also, the light on the walls from the lamps is too well defined, I think. It would be more of a difuse wash.

 

Finally, the pillows on the floor are a nice touch, but they block a visual path around the bottom of the picture, better to keep some open floor showing. Either lower the crop, or put one pillow leaning on the bench (the left pillow).

 

Great work, so far!

[yosa_b]

thanks ernest for your coments i think your right, but i still think that the color bleeding is to much.

[innerdream]

Pretty beautiful. The pillows on the floor look to be floating?