helenistikyay Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 this is a personel work of mine i started it from a reference image and add a few details 3ds max + v-ray + photoshop any comment and critics are welcomed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 you should post it in wip section, youll get more replies..the scene needs more contrast, its a bit washed up and flat inside, but overall its a nice work and a nice start.. is it possible to add some stuff on the wall? like pictures or something else? shoes will look better on the floor...the candles should be short in length after burning through the night, and a comforter on the bed would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toh Posted August 4, 2010 Share Posted August 4, 2010 Looking good, but maybe a few things to improve. The drape looks fake, the mirror frame looks a bit unnatural, and I wish there was something outside of the balcony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
helenistikyay Posted August 5, 2010 Author Share Posted August 5, 2010 thanks for replies and you are right i was in a hurry to make something good and ignore some details i'll try to fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted August 5, 2010 Share Posted August 5, 2010 I would prefer to have the bed against the wall. I like the mood of ther endering by the way. good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
helenistikyay Posted August 7, 2010 Author Share Posted August 7, 2010 [ATTACH=CONFIG]38535[/ATTACH] i think this one is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormchaser Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 i think light is still not right, there should be more contrast, the darkest part of the room is still too bright, it should be darker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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