abmitalia Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Studio/Institution: abmitaliaGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3Ds Max - VrayDescription: Starting out the living room. What do I miss ? Thank's for watching. RK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Hunt Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 modeling is good, lighting is OK but there is not story behind the image, no interest, no focus. The objects have a common detail of the curving leg echoing the curve on the piano, maybe explore that relationship to find an interesting composition. Just a suggestion jhv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abmitalia Posted August 20, 2010 Author Share Posted August 20, 2010 modeling is good, lighting is OK but there is not story behind the image, no interest, no focus. The objects have a common detail of the curving leg echoing the curve on the piano, maybe explore that relationship to find an interesting composition. Just a suggestion jhv Very intersting suggestion. Analysing the render on this side may be I played too much on horizontal lines , forgetting about building up tension with triangles and diagonals. Good analysing mode Justin. Thanks . RK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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