pool room

[NerWe]

Studio/Institution: private
Genre: Residential Interior
Software: 3d max, v-ray
Description:

Hi, this is something that I did in my free time. I would appreciate if anyone can help with all this speckles on the walls. I used vray camera and as for the lights I used target direct light to simulate the sun and vray plane lights on the windows.

 

Every C&C are welcomed.

[BrianKitts]

Quite a cluttered mess...... the original lighting in the Evermotion scene that you took everything from was better than your current setup, perhaps you should revisit the original file.

 

[ATTACH]38825[/ATTACH]

[GUSN]

Quite a cluttered mess...... the original lighting in the Evermotion scene that you took everything from was better than your current setup, perhaps you should revisit the original file.

 

[ATTACH]38825[/ATTACH]

 

I guess it does bare some resemblance:( Can you say busted!!!

[NerWe]

Of course I took evermotion scene, I did not try to hide that and I said that I was doing this in my free time (by that I meant time to practice). I did not mean to trick anyone and I never said that this was my project. And I asked you for help and you immediately attacked me for plagiarism. So Brian and GUSN thanx for your comments but please don't comment my work any more

[abmitalia]

Of course I took evermotion scene, I did not try to hide that and I said that I was doing this in my free time (by that I meant time to practice). I did not mean to trick anyone and I never said that this was my project. And I asked you for help and you immediately attacked me for plagiarism. So Brian and GUSN thanx for your comments but please don't comment my work any more

 

Hey Hey - Try to get what Brian ment to tell you '' revisit the Evermotion scene '' in order to learn about lightning tecnique. And he told you that in a honest way.Thats all. RK

[GUSN]

NerWe,

A lot of us have to start somewhere. There's nothing wrong with

getting ideas from other scene set-ups. I wasn't trying to "attack you."

My apologies.

[NerWe]

If that is the case than I'm sorry, maybe his attachment was step over that made me think in a wrong way.

[BrianKitts]

My post was a direct comment about lighting I never said anything about plagiarism. Your scene appears to be night outside with a bright sun shining in through the window. The attachment was to illustrate the balance the original scene has between the interior lighting and the exterior illumination. The reason for the full site screen shot is because I wanted to credit its location and not infringe copyright by just using their image.

 

But what I noticed immediately was that the scene is overcrowded with additional model components that really don't make sense, for instance weights and wine on a purple shag rug in a pool room?

 

Perhaps you should tell us what specifically you're trying to achieve with this exercise. Is it a test of lighting? color? composition?

Edited August 25, 2010 by BrianKitts

[NerWe]

Brian we obviously didn't understand each other. I thought that you wanted to infringe copyright by using evermotion image. My apologies. And about the scene it is a test of lightning, not composition. It seems that if the room isn't bright enough in all shadowed areas appears this speckles especially on the walls, and that is repeating in all my interior scenes with low amount of light (daylight scenes). And yes, I agree that scene is overcrowded with all this models, and I put them there just to fill an empty space without any interior planing.

Edited August 25, 2010 by NerWe