tcupp Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 Studio/Institution: NoneGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: Max/VRAYDescription: Due tomorrow...any feedback is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupsster Posted September 26, 2010 Share Posted September 26, 2010 Hello tcupp, more light/shadow contrast and pull down that blur.. It's killing that detailed foliage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tcupp Posted September 26, 2010 Author Share Posted September 26, 2010 Thanks for the feedback. Made the mods by masking out the "bloom effect" in the vegetated area and duplicating my dirt pass for some darker shadows. Here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Hunt Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 loose the lense flare, its distracting and not at the correct angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akira329 Posted September 27, 2010 Share Posted September 27, 2010 I think you should get rid of the lens flare too, it doesn't add anything to your image. I love the softness! Great! I think you should also add some joint lines in those white bands. Looks unreal. Nice technique though! Antaiwan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wasteland giant Posted September 28, 2010 Share Posted September 28, 2010 lose the lens flare get a better sky as it doesn't complement the overall lighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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