S Gabriel Building

[andrejcordeiro]

Studio/Institution: Espaço A3
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Autocad, Studio Max Design, Vray and Photoshop
Description:

Hola =)

 

can you guys help me with this image

 

Kind regards

[Akira329]

I would ditch the hanging plant.

Are you under a tree or something?

I would add some vehicles and change the sky.

Other than that looks interesting.

[andrejcordeiro]

Good morning Akira

 

Thanks...for for your reply.

 

This is my new image. I didn´t ditch the tree, cause i liked has it is, and the sky also.

 

But i did put more "action" in the scene, has you´ve adviced me to do.

 

So this is the new version of this image.

[abmitalia]

Interesting render. For me there is some move blur contradiction. A car running has less than a woman walking, which has the same as the man jogging. Strange. So being longer exposing time the shadow area is much to dark. RK

[Brodie Geers]

Ya, I think the motion blur on the people is hurting you, imo. Besides the runner having more blur than the car, it would be really really difficult (impossible?) to get that amount of motion blur in a daylight scene in real life photography. Maybe that's ok with you for your purposes but it's something to consider if you're going for photorealism.

 

I don't mind the tree in the foreground but overall I think there's a lot of really dark foreground that makes it feel claustrophobic to me. I think the view is probably aiding in that feeling as well. I can ALMOST see that whole corner on the left and I don't know what happens to the right. I feel like I want to see more of the building and the context. Without knowing the site, my instinct would be to want a view that focuses on that mystery corner in the foreground and then fading out along the long wall which we're looking at now (in other words the camera man would take about 60 steps to his left and then face the building).

 

As for the building itself, I think it looks very good. Only thing I can think of would be to maybe give more of an indication of what the white material is. I'm guessing stucco? If so some variation in roughness/specularity and some bump would go a long way to show that.

 

-Brodie

[neil poppleton]

Ditch the tree, or maybe try a different tree in the corner. This one doesnt work for me.

[pajalmeida]

I agree with the motion blur on the people and i would not put so many window blinds closed, maybe trying to put diferent ones.