Perforated Metal Facade

[smithy_gas]

Studio/Institution: Personal Work
Genre: Commercial Exterior
Software: 3DS Max Vray Photoshop
Description:

Hi all,

 

Just a quick update on a different type of image I have been working on. Drawing on many other influences and some of my own architectural work, I came up with this simple building.

 

It isn't highly detailed and I know some of the main deficiencies with render due to my nice and outdated system at the moment.

 

I do welcome general CC about things I could perhaps work on.

 

Thanks,

 

Craig

[Stephen Thomas]

It doesn't really read like perforated metal I'm afraid, neither the material nor the pattern. Perhaps you could look at some more reference images. The compostion is a little weak too and the entourage/foreground elements are not particularly well done either. I think the general mood and intention is nice, you just need to work on the execution of it.