single luxury house exterior

[Stan Zaslavsky]

Studio/Institution: Eagle Vision Property
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Max2011 VRay PS
Website: http://www.eagleproperty.com.au
Description:

Hi all,

new project i'm working on - tri level home, and the outside needs to be properly illustrated

 

at the moment i'm finding it a bit too white - any suggestions to make it "pop" better?

 

look forward to your feedback

 

i'm still undecided whether to fill out the interior and add lighting inside - kinda strange to turn on lights during hte day

[Stan Zaslavsky]

here is an update - i decided to add some people to show scale

[carlotristan3d]

Just a few things that pop up instantly:

1. the grass is too green compared to the other foliage, specially aganst the palm infront of the house which appears saturated.

2. white outline (there's a name to this, just can't recall) to your people is very evident

3. glass needs environment to reflect, you're probably using vray sun+sky- reflection is better when they are at an angle, but front view I find that having a map in the reflection slot results better.

[Stan Zaslavsky]

thanks Carlos - great comments ...

will work on the glass reflections still - it is a vray sun+sky combination atm

 

i've defringed the people (good pick up on the white outline) and desaturated my sky

 

see enclosed the current version

[neil poppleton]

The image overall is far too bright. Needs more contracts.

[Stan Zaslavsky]

thanks Neil - it used to be with mr that my images were too dark ... now with vray they are too bright

[neil poppleton]

Looking again its not too way off, I think if you look at the glass that may help overall. The glass currently needs reviewing.

[Stan Zaslavsky]

the latest edition of the house is here ..

 

better material contrast (i think) but glass still work in progress