asylum24 Posted July 8, 2004 Share Posted July 8, 2004 So I've been using softimage for about 2 or 3 weeks now and this is my first scene that I've done. so just C&C away at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asylum24 Posted July 8, 2004 Author Share Posted July 8, 2004 anyone? about anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard McCarthy Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 I think I like the 2nd image the best There is a problem with the shadow leak though, look at the top right corner. Overall, it's nice simple image, just keep improving material variation, maybe put in some plants at the corners Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asylum24 Posted July 9, 2004 Author Share Posted July 9, 2004 can you tell me why you dont like the third one? is it the color? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MulaG Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 This is a nice scene, I agree with Richard, the second image is better - why? - The colour would look much better if there was a bump map added to the walls as they look a bit flat at the mo. The mirrors on the wall also look flat. You are planning to add some sinks aren't you? :-) Oh what about a bath mat be it mesh or fabric - to add a bit of character to the room? Keep tweeking and this would be a great render! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asylum24 Posted July 9, 2004 Author Share Posted July 9, 2004 Its at home rendering right now, so I will have an update tonight, I added a door, fixed the trim, fixed the shadow in the upper right hand corner(but I think I over saturated the wall now on accident), added a painting, added a stand that the porcelan counter thingy sits on, and worked on the floor texture a lil bit. and yes Im going to add sinks but, they are going to be more like wash basin bowl things rather than a sink that sits in the counter top.. keep the crits. coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe Posted July 10, 2004 Share Posted July 10, 2004 I like the 2nd image too and your wood texture is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asylum24 Posted July 10, 2004 Author Share Posted July 10, 2004 put the wood stand in, trashcan, door, fixed the towel bars, put in wash bowls,a painting(by the door) fixed the trim, adj. the color and lighting a lil, diff. camera angle.... I need to redo the trashcan material cuz right now it looks realy frosted plastic or something when infact its metal.. go figure.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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