Test perspective

[Joseph A Haddad]

Studio/Institution: University of Balamand, A.L.B.A.
Client: Matar Architects
Genre: Commercial Exterior
Software: 3dstudio Max, Vray, and Adobe Photoshop
Description:

Dear guys, this is a test render for a house, need to know from you what to do to make it more attractive.

Thanks in advance

[carlotristan3d]

Sorry, but I'm not liking the design. Roof Fascia feels very heavy. Don't like the roof color, it does not go with the more muted tone of the building. And what's with the sloping chimney? As for the rendering-glass needs to reflect something, specially near horizon level. I think it'll look better to comp the human figures in PS rather than 3D.But this is just my opinion.

[Joseph A Haddad]

Thanks for your comment, you are totally right but i am not the architect here, so what you see here is his design.

[eagle_ear]

I think it'll look better to comp the human figures in PS rather than 3D.

Agreed. Maybe tweak the view/camera angle, seems a little high and straight on.

[Fouinard]

I think the composition miss something on the left of the picture, maybe one more tree to fill the gap. Maybe there's too much reflection on the terrace on the right. And the colors are a bit too flat.

[mgraphix]

You need to get the scaling right. The car is too big, or the people too small to start with. The texture is repeating and kind of flat. And in my opinion 3d people looks awful:) Better without...

[physics]

i Agree..the image is too flat...and the shadows have to be well defined to get the depth.

[jc3dm]

Ok first thing is to recognize that having a simple architecture does not prevent us to do a good render.

I think that with better lighting will get better results. You can use Vraysun whit vraysky.

Also you could improve the image composition. Try whit some 3d trees, whit differents scales, the sky color should match whit the ambient light. The glass should reflect and be more tranparent.

I hope my tips are useful

Regards

JC

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