My Townhouse

[AtomicZA]

This is my first try at something like this so im looking for some feedback. Im using Lightwave 8.0 which ive hardly used. Its still far from finished...

 

So please guys give me some input

 

Thanks

[MJL Imaging]

I would suggest trying to create a sort of one point perspective directly over the model, so you can see into the rooms more. Play with the camera lens so you can get a wide enough look at the whole model. In addition to that, I allowed the light to illuminate all of the geometry in the room, but not the tops of the walls, left the background black so the wall tops would run into the black background, creating a pretty neat presentation. I can attach an incomplete image of what I'm talking about. Half your fun was creating the model I'm sure, now the other half would be being able to see all the content inside the rooms.

 

I hope this helped a bit

[IC]

I think it needs more detail and a better viewing angle(unless you cut some of the walls down like a machine part diagram)

I did something similar a while ago and I made the interior quite realistic even though its an npr exercise.

This was done in LW too.

[AtomicZA]

Thanks guys. Will look at the camera angle, the only problem that im having is that the place is really small but i'll give it a wizz

[STRAT]

IC - thats an excellent image m8

 

i did this type of thing a few years back in Viz3i. not as impressive as yours, but perhaps my attempts will be nicerer in C4D

[AtomicZA]

Here is another render with a differant camera angle... still need to add in the windows etc. But I think this is a better view. Let me know what you think

 

Have to say I agree with STRAT you got some skills...

[AtomicZA]

Here is another render... how can I imporve the lighting? At the moment im only using radiosity + 1 other light @ 20% intensity

[IC]

Thanks for the comments.

 

I treated the lighting in mine like a normal daylight scene; shadow mapped spotlight for the sun and two point lights to lighten the dim areas.

Radiosity was set to monte carlo with a white background.