Arch-Vis Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 Studio/Institution: Arch-VisGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: AutoCAD, 3dsMax 2011, VRAY 1.5, PhotshopWebsite: http://www.arch-vis.co.ukDescription: Hi All. Enclosed are a couple of views of a new build residential house I am working on at the moment, they are only low res at the mo, but all c&c's welcome. Thanks Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aaron2004 Posted December 2, 2010 Share Posted December 2, 2010 (edited) Very nice. A few things, though. 1-Your grass is the first thing I see, even in the thumbnail. It looks like a green circus tent. I see what you are trying to accomplish, but try a different texture. 2-The pair of windows on the 2nd floor has a very harsh reflection. Could you put some open curtains in the immediate background of the window to play a bit with that reflection? EDIT: I see you already HAVE curtains in there. Maybe just tone down the reflection, or change it a little bit. Is your glass reflection using the fall-off map method? That may do the trick. Aaron Edited December 2, 2010 by Aaron2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arch-Vis Posted December 7, 2010 Author Share Posted December 7, 2010 Hi Thanks for the comments, below is an updated version following client comments and taking on board those above. Please let me know what you think. Thanks Andy[ATTACH=CONFIG]40280[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfured20 Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 Better than the first image. The grass is still distracting, but less so. Also, why are the sconce lights on during the daytime? They would have to be very bright indeed to show up like the are on a sunny afternoon. Try adding some furniture on the patio, perhaps with a nice colorful umbrella to break up the scene a bit. its coming along ok tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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