aristocratic3d Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 Studio/Institution: Aristocratic3dGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max 2010 vray1.5 sp4Description: Hi, this is my first bird eye view render. and I looking for critics. I will be very glad to have your comments and update my rendering based upon your suggestion. Thanks! Abdullah [ATTACH]41109[/ATTACH] [ATTACH]41110[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whaling Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 hello - i like the idea of using half height walls. Maybe you should show the doors though, so we can see where they open. Also, you show the windows in one place on the upper floor, but not in the other openings. This make the image seem unfinished. On the ground floor, the corridor seems to lead to a dead end, is that the stairs? If so maybe change the viewpoint to make it more clear. About the colours, you show realistic colours for some things, like the floors for example, but not for other things like the sheets on the beds and the wardrobes. Hope this helps... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aristocratic3d Posted January 31, 2011 Author Share Posted January 31, 2011 Thanks man. I was think to change the view point too. I will use doors and some windows. thanks a lot for your suggestion. It really helped me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovechaurasia Posted January 31, 2011 Share Posted January 31, 2011 I think u should add vray plane at zero level may be light grey and sunlight from any direction with vray cam.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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