Feedback for University dissertation

[dynasty87]

Studio/Institution: Study
Genre: Commercial Interior
Software: Vray
Description:

Im a university student currently doing a Vray project as part of my dissertation I have to get feedback on my work. The image supplied does have an ambient occlusion applied to it, I do know there is work still to be done but this is my first real attempt at Vray so not sure where to go from here. All feedback is welcome and if you are from within the industry whether it be freelance or with a company please could you say so.

Thanks

[Fooch]

Pretty good for a first run. I remember mine. Ugh.

 

Textures seem to be tiling plus bathroom tiles are a lil big?

Becareful with the super wide angle lens because it can really screw the scale up.

Other than that, it's a really good first go.

 

Putting on my lecturer hat now.

Seems there isn't much "design/process work" shown. Very much a basic room render

Is it part of a communication/technical class. Perhaps more can be done or a different subject matter. If this is for a uni project , my advice is go nuts. You will be rendering 101 bedrooms in the future so experiment a little here at the start.

[JustinTuaylou]

The render looks nice, good first shot. I think that the room is is too clean and empty, it has no personality. For instance, a pair of shoes on the floor or a statue on the dresser might change the feel of the room. I'm not saying to make it messy, just add some human touches to it.

 

Also, the white wall under the mirror looks like it is reflecting the floor, or has some GI noise on it.