mgraphix Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 (edited) Studio/Institution: mgraphicsGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max, vray, PsDescription: Hi. I´d love some constructive criticism about this image. Trying my hardest to learn right now:) ps. The focus point is on the bookpile to the right, but for some reason when I resized the image it looks really soft. It´s tack sharp in full size...3000px. Edited March 21, 2011 by mgraphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tron Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Looks great. The only thing I noticed is that the chair has a hard shadow, but it looks like the window is the only light source. I assume the track lights are causing the shadow, but they look like they are off. Maybe add a glare and warm up the color temp on the track lights to make the source of the light more obvious. Otherwise, very nice light and clean render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mgraphix Posted March 21, 2011 Author Share Posted March 21, 2011 You´re so right. I stared myself blind on other things and didn´nt see that. That shadow are waay to hard. It´s from track light in the roof that are almost burned out by the windowlight. I had more of an eveninglight feeling earlier where that was visible. I think I´ll just turn it off. will update later totay... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Graphite Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 The Image is looking great; Just some comments on the design if I may. (Just giving you some ideas.) You have alot of books on the ground, being "unpacked" but no bookcase/shelves anywhere in the scene. Try adding a couple side tables or a bookshelf. The back Wall seems a bit bare; maybe at a piece of art above the bed? If your trying to instill the Idea of "Moving in", maybe add some more boxes into the foreground of the image. Also; reconsider the chair. don't get me wrong; its a great model but it really doesn't feel like it belongs in this scene, try going for something abit more contemporary with a wood finish that matches the bed. LOL! Sorry *shrugs* just trying to help Great job though.. seriously -N Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mgraphix Posted March 21, 2011 Author Share Posted March 21, 2011 (edited) Thanks:) I´m gonna start by turning off the colored spotlight pointing on the chair, and let the window light flood a bit on the chair as well. The wood is actually quite like the bed in original without the spotlight, but maybe I need to desaturate it further. I am trying to instill the idea of moving in, and think you´re right about more boxes. I don´t feel like adding more furniture / art at this time, but maybe at a later time when they´re completely moved in:) Edited March 21, 2011 by mgraphix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mgraphix Posted March 21, 2011 Author Share Posted March 21, 2011 Updated. What do u think ? I need to learn spline mapping better. The texture on the chair is weird... Chair is desaturated, spotlight turned off and two more boxes is added. moved some things a little as well [ATTACH=CONFIG]41939[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Graphite Posted April 8, 2011 Share Posted April 8, 2011 I like it Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TJunkers Posted April 21, 2011 Share Posted April 21, 2011 I have to say, I love the first image much more but only have a few things I'd change about it - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mgraphix Posted April 21, 2011 Author Share Posted April 21, 2011 Thanks:) Good tips. Cloth are the hardest to make natural and realistic... I really need to learn that. It destroys the best picture if the cloth looks like marzipan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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