Tiny Room Addtion

[JustinTuaylou]

Studio/Institution: Justin Traylor Design Visualization
Genre: Residential Interior
Software: Maya, Mudbox, Mental Ray, Photoshop
Website: http://www.jtraylor.com
Description:

Hello:

 

This is a rendering for a tiny sitting room addition. I need feedback before this is done, so any and all comments are welcome.

 

Thanks,

 

Justin

[Jane Namenye]

My first impression was it's a crop of a larger image, and I want to see the rest of it. Could you show a little more of the room?

[JustinTuaylou]

Thanks for the comment, I understand what you are saying. But it is a very tiny room (about 10' x 10'), there's not much room to show anything else.

[Aaron2004]

Then do a shot from above and remove the ceiling, or use a wider angle lens. Right now, it looks like you are trying to focus on the furniture, not the room as a whole. Also, think about using smaller furniture. The big, plush chair may be better replaced by a something a bit more delicate for such a small room (for rendering purposes).

 

The lighting/textures looks OK, but it's rather noisy. Also, there is too much glare from the lamp on the table. This may be more realistic, but it's the first thing my eye sees.

[JustinTuaylou]

Thanks