Alumni Center WIP Day, Dusk, Night

[Chewbacca]

Studio/Institution: JLG Architects
Genre: Commercial Exterior
Software: 3dsmax, vray, photoshop
Description:

Here are few renderings of a proposed Alumni Center at a local university. I have a few days to keep tweaking these, so any comments are welcomed. Thanks.

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[JustinTuaylou]

In the dusk image, the main entrance to the building is creating a strong reflection in the grass. This looks pretty strange to me.

 

Also, all of the images seem slightly blurry or out of focus.

[Matt McDonald]

The foreground grass in the day and night shots looks unkept and there is something odd about the glass. Maybe too reflective or maybe the buidling is too transparent. I dunno, I notice it at the entry and at the auditorium(?). I don't get a sense of space from the air in front of the building, the auditorium and then the air behind the building.

[Chewbacca]

Thanks guys for the comments, I do need to spend a bit more time on these especially the glass, something is not right. I will also try to get the grounds crew to mow the lawn as well!

[TJunkers]

Looks great overall. I do agree about the glass being a bit too reflective in the day light picture, but that may simply be due to the hdri or image you used for the sun because thats making the glass reflect a lot harder in that image. Did you add an AO pass? I notice a few areas dont have shadows that look like they should such as around the back window frames.