micco Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 Hello, this is my first interior scene and I'm asking some comments. (the tile behind the kitchen is abit continuous but I'm going to fix it later). This is made with mental ray. There is one omni light behind every window (3) and one spotlight which is the sun. interior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fran Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 Hi Mikko, Overall, I like it. The couch and the camera angle are the only things I don't care for. The materials are very good with the exception of the couch and the tile pattern, which you had already mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 site blocked! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
micco Posted August 1, 2004 Author Share Posted August 1, 2004 Thanks Fran. I will make the couch, the tile and the camera angle again... Site is blocked? What a hell... well anyway, here is the attachment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 Hi, for your first render interior, not bad!, i think you must need to desaturate the image, the flat colours (red and blue) looks like has no material on it, for flat colour materials just try to use some noise maps with 2 similar colours and small size, and more desaturated...... LETS go AHEAD!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 1, 2004 Share Posted August 1, 2004 1st interior? youve done your job well, it is quite good.. - try to lessen the number of those bottles on top of your cabinet its too much. - try to soften the color of your chairs frame its too pure.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harjeet Singh Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 nice start. reduce bottles. correct the angle it looks like rolled. add details to furniture colors. good start again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 let me add, nice floor.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pmanahan Posted August 2, 2004 Share Posted August 2, 2004 Very nice job. The combination of the camera angle and the bottles makes the scene feel unsettling, as though the bottles are going to fall down. The bottles along the wall don't seem to have enough depth, dimension. pmanahan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jurX Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 ...yes kicks is right,...it needs more defination,... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tcorbett Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 What draws my attention about this is the bottles. Maybe because they are too flat and non-reflective, or maybe because it looks like the owner of this kitchen has a serious drinking problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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