Early Evening

[Peteroz1]

Studio/Institution: Peter Thomas Building Design
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: Caddsman Architect, Xara Designer Pro
Description:

Suggestions for improvements welcome.

 

Thanks

 

Peter

Edited May 6, 2011 by Peteroz1

[Stan Zaslavsky]

Hi Peter,

If you can do some post production work in Photoshop - you can do a lot with brightness and contrast, colour levels and adding scenery - people and cars.

I don't know your software and its capabilities and limitations - but the lighting is pretty dark and all the detail under the eave is lost.

Your mapping of the grass could also do with some more work - it looks very grainy to me.

Sorry to be harsh - but keep going - the model looks pretty good, so its a matter of building your rendering skills further

Cheers,

[Peteroz1]

Just looked at it on a different monitor and it was so dark, I have lightened it up a bit. and updated. Looks to dark on one monitor and to light on the other... mmm

 

with the grass, I can not seem to get it right, one map it to green the next lookes flattened, then there it grainy -- any hints.. it it the size I change??

 

All good feedback... I am just starting with getting into pushing the raytace to a highter level.