andymcnair Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Hi, I thought I'd post this up for some critting before handing over to the client. The project is a flatted development, images are to be used for marketing the project. Software: Viz 4, Final Render Stage 1, Photoshop Hardware: AMD 3Ghz Barton, 1.5Gb ram Render time: internal = 1 hour 45 mins including lighting solution at 1600 x 1200, cutaway = 2 hours 15 mins incl lighting Thanks, Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kicks Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trhoads Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Your images are a little small, hard to get a good look at them. Even as small as they are, they look really nice. Is the kitchen of the first image supposed to be that blurry? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 i like the 2nd image.. image is small.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymcnair Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thanks for the replies. kicks: Couch is the correct height. The glazed double doors are 2050mm high x 1950mm wide which open onto the balcony. trhoads: the splashback to the rear wall is a matte stainless steel sheet. The client requested it be a dull finish, not shiny. A little blurry though... I just noticed that the supports are missing from the shelves. Images are now larger. Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trhoads Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Ah, much better. it was the size that was deceiving me. Very nice, very soft lighting. I like them a lot, nice to see that you did not try to over clutter the space with all sorts of things. Very clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 yup nice... -just wondering ewhat would be your light source at night, seem you dnt have any ceiling lights( except from the kitchen..) -are those sliding doors? or hinged? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donix Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 impressive presentation for the 2nd image... clients will be able to determine the layout of the inside.... good idea dude. nice rendering also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymcnair Posted August 4, 2004 Author Share Posted August 4, 2004 jysngltndz: there are recessed ceiling spots around the perimter of the room which are out of camera shot The double doors are hinged to swing out - door handles etc to be added... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 ok, very good excuse...hehehehehehe,,.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Potts Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 Hi andymcnair, I'm showed my workmate about your image work. He love it and want excatly one of those your 3D sofa and glass table. I trying find match to your 3D sofa and glass table over internet.. Would you mind tell me where these get from ??? or your own design these ?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymcnair Posted August 6, 2004 Author Share Posted August 6, 2004 Chris, the table is Poul Kjaerholm's PK61 coffee table designed about 1955. Can come in a variety of finishes including slate marble and glass. The 3D model can be downloaded from http://www.fritzhansen.com/ The couches are by Mark Goetz designed for Herman Miller. It comes in a variety of finishes including walnet, ash, ebony and cherry as shown, leather or fabric. The 3D model can be downloaded from http://www.hermanmiller.com/ Andy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Potts Posted August 6, 2004 Share Posted August 6, 2004 Cheer I got it... Thank andymcnair It good website.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SEIF Posted August 11, 2004 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Thanks for the replies. kicks: Couch is the correct height. The glazed double doors are 2050mm high x 1950mm wide which open onto the balcony. trhoads: the splashback to the rear wall is a matte stainless steel sheet. The client requested it be a dull finish, not shiny. A little blurry though... I just noticed that the supports are missing from the shelves. Images are now larger. Andy very nice...i really like the second image more....excellent presentation... i just see that the doors are too low...2050 isnt quite pleasing... concerning the doors......being hinged isn't quite convincing......no space,they have to be sliding... anyway as jysngltndz said...its a good excuse... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ist00 Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 andy, looks good one obvious comment though... its far too bright if its for aberdeen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 *good presentation bro! *is it the real background of the scene?, it seems that hauz resting up the hill , or it is above the slope... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Extraterroide Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 Good work, good presentations, single a thing, with the quality that have your works, needs caustic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harjeet Singh Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 great work. congrats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Matthews Posted August 31, 2004 Share Posted August 31, 2004 Very nice. My only comment would be the kitchen in the first image looks very bright compared to the living room. If both rooms are supposed to be the focus, than I would say that the lighting should be turned down in the kitchen. Other than that, very nice. _Jason Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thieverycorp Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 i like the way u link up the 1st and 2nd floor, im juz werking on a similar project like this, and u gave me a realli great great idea!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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