Buffalo Bills Posted May 19, 2011 Share Posted May 19, 2011 Studio/Institution: ConsultantGenre: Commercial InteriorSoftware: SketchUp, 3DMax2010, PhotoshopWebsite: http://www.behance.net/Michael_SecristDescription: I wanted to show all of you a progress on a project that I'm working on for a company that will end up using this piece as an interaction tool on there website. I created this design on my own with direction from the client on how he envisioned this piece to look and work as far as the camera angle and actions that are to take place in the space. Modeled in SketchUp. The Furniture in the seating area were brought in from 3D wharehouse and modified for my use as well as the white machine to the right. Everything else was modeled by me in 3DMax. Photoshop was use to add more Ambient Occlusion. I would like to hear your thoughts on it. The final will have more people manning the registers and ordering food. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt McDonald Posted May 19, 2011 Share Posted May 19, 2011 Something about the lighting in the dining area bugs me a bit. All of the glass is really blasted out (as I think it should be) but the windows don't seem to be contributing much to the lighting inside the dining area. I also think the image seems a bit blue, which has the effect of keeping the space looking clean but it doesn't quite feel right. On the other hand I don't think I'd submit a "dirty" looking rendering to my client. I like all of the detail that you have in there. It looks really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomD_Arch Posted May 21, 2011 Share Posted May 21, 2011 Not sure how deep the space is where the drive-up staffer stands, but the condiment cart looks to be placed in their way. Maybe should be turned and under the POS counter? Just my two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Doerksen Posted May 22, 2011 Share Posted May 22, 2011 good attention to detail in this one, your AO distance needs to be increased, noticeable at the top of the image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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