Ngel Posted June 3, 2011 Share Posted June 3, 2011 Studio/Institution: University 3Dmax final projectGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: 3D Max 2009 , VRay adv 1.50SP4Description: Hey guyz this was our final project for our first 3D course in uni, and we had to do the whole conception/modeling/rendering in around an hour... i did this, it was considered one of the best, and i really really think its crap, lots of things to do changed and modified compared to wat ive seen on this website, and i really need ur advice. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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BenM08 Posted June 3, 2011 Share Posted June 3, 2011 it looks pretty nice cant really critique it much if you were under such a ridiculous deadline.... anything anyone can get done in an hour is good. I would address the ground for sure though and your sky looks really really stretched, not sure if you are doing your sky in post or rendering it with your ibl background turned on. The building itself looks nice though especially if you really only had 1 hour start to finish. Not sure if I like the wireframe fall off to black, perhaps a faded wireframe on the render itself would look better than fading it all the way to blacks and just having a full wireframe of a cg car. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ngel Posted June 3, 2011 Author Share Posted June 3, 2011 the sky is an enviromment map, and the bitmap is on of the default ones that comes installed with 3DMAX 2009 so ye and its stretched... i think i should have applied it on a background plane with its original size the ground, ive used a plugin named Autograss... i gave it a try on a 1mx1m, it rendered really fast. came to apply it on this, render needed not less then 20 minutes of 99% CPU usage, time i cannot afford... the wireframe is just to cover the lack of the ground tho i really loved the wireframe car effect thx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ngel Posted June 4, 2011 Author Share Posted June 4, 2011 some modification to the ground/light, am and will always be open for comments... actually its why am posting here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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