Patteman Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 Studio/Institution: DKP MediaClient: personalGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3ds max, vray, PSDescription: Hi everyone, this is my first post here! And as for that i would like some c&c on my bathroom render or maybe some tips on how to achieve more realism in it. Regards, Patrik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ngel Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 i must say, first sigh really really looks real,well done a detail or two that gives u up... the plant in the corner ? it really looks fake/3D.... and the wood thing on the right, is doubty... and its too clean, considering the many dirt on the floor... if u could reduce abit the dirt, and i duno.... the wood it doubty.... oh and one last thing... the faucet, or watever u call it, the thing that throws water, it looks really 3d. but its really an impressive WIP, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patteman Posted June 4, 2011 Author Share Posted June 4, 2011 i must say, first sigh really really looks real,well done a detail or two that gives u up... the plant in the corner ? it really looks fake/3D.... and the wood thing on the right, is doubty... and its too clean, considering the many dirt on the floor... if u could reduce abit the dirt, and i duno.... the wood it doubty.... oh and one last thing... the faucet, or watever u call it, the thing that throws water, it looks really 3d. but its really an impressive WIP, well done Thanks for the reply, obviously i need some more work on the materials. I'll get in to it and see i can make them more beliveable. thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ngel Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 the floor, the walls and the ceilling are really great and real, those are gd, just the things i mentioned before, and it will be perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patteman Posted June 4, 2011 Author Share Posted June 4, 2011 [ATTACH=CONFIG]43120[/ATTACH] Now i have done some alternations, personally i think i got a better result but i cant really get that plant to look good enough. Any tips anyone, im using a leaf texture as a two-sided vray material. Regards, Patrik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCM Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 Very nice WIP, My only suggestion would be a compositional one. The toilet on the left side is a bit distracting. I would probably crop it out of the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patteman Posted June 4, 2011 Author Share Posted June 4, 2011 Very nice WIP, My only suggestion would be a compositional one. The toilet on the left side is a bit distracting. I would probably crop it out of the image. Thanks, and yeah i've thought about the toilet aswell. Maybe i should swap it with something else that fits better to the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted June 4, 2011 Share Posted June 4, 2011 great start - looks very nice and i like the mood you've created of calm and tranquility.. i would look at making the towel hanging there a bit more fluffy and maybe add some colour to it ... at the moment it looks more like paper folded rather than a towel - maybe make it longer too ? keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ngel Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 the plant is kind of better this time, i echo StanZ, the towel can use some improvement, and i must disagree with JCM. the toilet is like THE thing that gives it some more realistic aspect... maybe show it abit more, or push it abit back keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kubiak54 Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 For me, this is very very good looking as it is.....At firts sight it was perfect....an that is what I think is the most important thing! Now when checking details. Plant - looks a little artificial. Thats everything i may say... really beautiful overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patteman Posted June 7, 2011 Author Share Posted June 7, 2011 Thank you all for the comments, if i have the time ill post a final render with an upgraded towel tomorrow, after that its vacation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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