Stan Zaslavsky Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Studio/Institution: Eagle Vision PropertyClient: private developerGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: Max2011 VRay PSWebsite: http://www.eagleproperty.com.auDescription: Hi guys, Haven't posted in a while - but here is one of our latest projects. Exterior of 5 townhouses in a beachside suburb in Melbourne. Look forward to your feedback and critique. Cheers, [ATTACH=CONFIG]43920[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peteroz1 Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Hi stanz The images look overly bright (extra so for Melbourne - should it not be raining with all the rain we have had ;-). ) and the people look like they are in the shade Peter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Thanks Peter - i'm hoping this is one day in hot january summertime i'm having some trouble with the people - you're right they are more in shade than in light ... cheers, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red33 Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Great start! I agree with the comments about the people and the over exposure. I would also lose the shirtless guy. Unless they are used in the proper context (beach, pool), half naked people tend to make the scene look trashy. The windows could use more reflections as well. Also, your sky doesn't seem to match your lighting. The shadows suggest that the sun is behind and to the right, but the sky looks like the sun is in front and to the left. Keep up the great work! Look forward to an update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Thanks Randy. Good pickup on the sky shadows and lighting - i'll look for a different sky or just flip this one around. Will keep you posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 Hi all, the client also didn't like the topless dude. I flipped the sky and it matched much better - thanks so much for the tip Randy. the job is now complete and on to the next. i'm finding that the clients rather than finetune the last little bit want to instead get the project on the market and hence i end up with a nearly cooked project. what's your take on this? do you push the client to keep going and finetune? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Hunt Posted July 25, 2011 Share Posted July 25, 2011 the fine tuning eats up profits, if the client is happy, its done. You can always fine tune to your hearts content later in your own time. Having said that, sometimes a bit of tweaking can make the world of difference. jhv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Zaslavsky Posted July 25, 2011 Author Share Posted July 25, 2011 hi justin - you're right ... this is why i've decided that once the client is happy - then let's finalise the job and for the next job build on the experience from this one ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red33 Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Glad I could help and that it worked out! I agree that, to a certain degree, if the client is happy it's done. However, future clients will look at your portfolio to determine the quality of the work you produce. I would suggest finding a way to incorporate the fine tuning into your work flow. Spending the time will be worth it in the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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