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Studio/Institution: aristocratic3d
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3Ds Max, vray
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Hello,

This is a raw file straight from 3DS Max. I am not that good in photoshopping.

I dont know what is lacking yet. The render is not looking realistic. render took more than 8 min.

 

 

Guys thanks in advance for your helpful comment.

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why in your first post the camera is very well done in rendering you should know the settings, unless you done the first post,, my friend work carefully on the background, the shadow too strong,, is that a pool at the right side corner of your house.. thanks hope to see more 3d in you...

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Mate your comment is not clear to me. I understand only two things. that you suggested to make the shadow more soft and to work on Background. what type of work should I do there?

 

Please advice. I am in desperate need of your suggestion as I am experimenting many things yet.

 

Thanks for your comment CHRIS!

why in your first post the camera is very well done in rendering you should know the settings, unless you done the first post,, my friend work carefully on the background, the shadow too strong,, is that a pool at the right side corner of your house.. thanks hope to see more 3d in you...
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I don't think the background is that bad but I do agree the shadows could be softened up a little.

An 8 minute render is nothing, bump up you settings a bit.

The grass looks good but is suffering from low render settings. On the grass in the right lower part of the image is a bare spot, what is that supposed to be?

The design of the house and POV are good but the materials could be better. I think they are a little over saturated and lack detail.

Is that a patio to the left of the garage by the house? (Chris thought it was a pool).

The windows look flat as well, no gloss or reflection.

 

It's a good image, it just needs a few tweaks.

As far as Photoshop goes, a couple of adjustment layers like color correction/color balance and a sharpen filter are used a lot. There are a lot of others but it depends on the image. Plus I am also no expert with Photoshop. There are others here who are better to comment about Photoshop use. :)

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Hello everybody.

I thought that the image is looking not that good because of its wall texture. I used a brick pattern now.

I have done some PS work too. But I am still not satisfied. :(

I dont know how artists do all the staff in PS? where as I think the raw image is better than the photoshoped image for in my case.

I need your help to improve the look. please do some c/c on my work.

Let me know your thought.

 

Thanks in advance

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Yes. I would love to see the changes you made. :) different and interesting look. although the image looks like there are noises and smoke in the air. no?

I dont know when I upload images into CGA it reduces the quality may be. please take a look at the same image I posted but with better quality and sharpness. https://odesk-prod-att.s3.amazonaws.com/Portfolio%20Items:746069:ImageUrl?AWSAccessKeyId=1XVAX3FNQZAFC9GJCFR2&Expires=2147483647&Signature=1p%2Fp0qz4eVFL84vXYb6iozN1K6A%3D

 

Please do post the tif file. and off-course many many thanks for the friendly help.

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