My first Exterior need advices

[kothu]

Studio/Institution: newmen visualization
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3ds max, vray, photoshop
Website: http://www.nmviz.com
Description:

Hi friends. I'm new to here and this is my first exterior render. i need some advices to improve my skill. Good luck everybody.

[Bruce Hart]

Hi Kothu,

it's a nice image - but the first thing my eye is drawn to is the leaves in the foreground. They seem too large and uniformly shaped. Good work on the background foliage. You could possibly crop the image or raise the camera target slightly so there is not as much emphasis on the driveway.

Edited August 17, 2011 by Bruce Hart

[kothu]

Thanks bro, next time i will be careful.

[kothu]

thanks bro. i will be careful next time.

[djohnson129]

This looks killer!

I think the leaves look great as they are; the radial blur or whatever you did helps keep the center of the image focused and the leaves not so much. With that said, it makes it easier to tell the tree in the front yard is an image and the house doesn't blend in toooo well with the background. I really wouldn't know how to improve that though. But awesome job!!

[aristocratic3d]

Looks like you worked on passes too much. I see pixllation in the corner of almost each elements. This is what happen when you work on Object ID passes.

[kothu]

Thank for all of your helps friends. i will render with some dof next time.