djohnson129 Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 Studio/Institution: PersonalGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3D Studio Max 2010, Mental RayDescription: Hello hello, Here is just about the final render of my project. I personally think the window area needs some improving, but I really don't know what I can do to achieve a more realistic light boom. The render you see has the window area duplicated and set to Screen in Photoshop; if you have a better technique I'd love to learn it pleease! Otherwise let me know what else I could improve on Thank you! -David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satishjogi Posted August 18, 2011 Share Posted August 18, 2011 I think it looks quite good as it is, but for the sake of getting better renders, maybe you can try adding direct sunlight? I think it might help connect the exterior to interior, the shadows from the balcony railings... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djohnson129 Posted August 18, 2011 Author Share Posted August 18, 2011 I took your suggestion and added the sun! I do think it looks better, and I also made a few minor additions you might notice. Let me know how it looks and anything else I can work on! Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abel.vargas Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 Hey, nice render. The direct sun light made it even better. Two things caught my eyes, the image on the background looks a little too low res and the books with the blue and orange texture looks a little repetitive, in texture and position. But maybe it's what you're looking for, so I'm not sure if that's something to change. I think your window is looking very nice and the textures a right on! Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin Hunt Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 The pink and orange colour scheme isn't doing it for me, the orange it too saturated and the pink too muddy. had a little play, hope you dont mind jhv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arshad17 Posted August 19, 2011 Share Posted August 19, 2011 Its pretty cool as it is..but maybe some directional sunlight pouring in,some use of DOF will make it more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djohnson129 Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 I can ser what u mean by the orange being too saturated. I did that in photoshop to help it look more like its sunrise. On my next day of ill work on varying the book textures and post an updated render! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redheadx Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 I would add some variety to the book cover and size. Since they are all the same my eye goes straight to them. The books on the far top shelf have a size variety but are also the same cover and everyone else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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