Indoor - hotel room - feedback?

[the Rev.]

Studio/Institution: Freelance
Genre: Commercial Interior
Software: Cinema 4D R12
Description:

Second attempt at arch viz.

Would love some feedback.

Thanks.

Edited August 24, 2011 by the Rev.

[arshad17]

Very nice for second try (: maybe you should use DOF to make it more photorealistic.The material of the door,need more reflection,but still nice

[the Rev.]

Thanks arshad.

Yes, it really is a second attempt. I'm just starting to learn viz and my first attempt was a kitchen I posted here a couple of months ago. It was actually pitiful - but after some work in lighting ended up a half-way decent piece.

 

You are right. I'll work on adding DOF see what it looks like.

 

As for the door material- are you talking about the glass door to the balcony or the wood doors on the entertainment center?

[coolhand]

A really good start, I for one would suggest adding a bump map to your floor to give it a bit more outline.

[AubreyM]

Aside from what has already be mentioned I would tone down the ambient occlusion. It's a little to obvious, especially in the corners.

[redheadx]

I would add a bump map to the floor. And possiblly add more misc object to add more interest to the scene.

 

The base of the coffee table seems a little big or maybe its just the angle.

Also try turning the gamma on if it is not already to bring out more color from the exterior