Tommy L Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Studio/Institution: Thomas LivingsClient: Friend / developerGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: max vray PScs4Website: http://www.visualwright.comDescription: Hello all, crits much appreciated. Ongoing project, no real deadline. Tom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary Ledgerwood Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Looking good. As far as crits go, the car isnt helping the image. It looks like it was comped in. Maybe just a different 3D car would be better. I would love to see some texture or a dirt map on all of that white facade material. Also adding some entourage to the sunroom area would be nice. I think that the trees and grass looks great. Is there a pool outside that sunroom? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted September 7, 2011 Author Share Posted September 7, 2011 Thanks Gary! Yes, I need to show that the house has parking and Smart design is the theme of the house. So I figured a Smart car would be good. Maybe Ill knock back the contrast on the car. Interior furniture will be X-Ref'ed from the interior file when thats done (there are interior renders also). No pool, just a patio so that needs some furniture also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matthewgriswold Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Looking real good, Tom. I don't mind the car, but it is awfully reflective. Maybe a .9 or .95 on the gloss will lighten up the crispness of the reflections. The edges of the tree in the foreground are too perfect. A low-power displacement map should do the trick. Also, the whites are a bit blown out for my taste, but as mentioned above, a dirt map might fix this. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aristocratic3d Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 I have visited your portfolio and seen some great renders. this does not seems to be your work after I have seen your sites. Anyway. the bush in the right side is not coming good. Also the background did not match with 3D trees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neil poppleton Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 Tom, Not your usual. Looks like there is no glass in the window frames. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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