acjwalker Posted September 25, 2011 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Studio/Institution: AWalker ImagesGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: 3DS MAX 2012, VRay, PhotoshopWebsite: http://cargocollective.com/andrewwalkerDescription: This is the first piece I have worked on in 6 weeks, I am currently recovering from open brain surgery, it removed 75% sight from my right eye so it has been tricky getting used to 3dsmax etc with this. These are WIP and creating some interior images as well. Constructive crit is welcome and wanted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AubreyM Posted September 25, 2011 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Love the wood and glass textures. Nice modeling and design. What is the roof supposed to be made of? That is the only thing that looks off to me, maybe it's the POV. It's got quite the overhang on the side. Glad you are on the mend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acjwalker Posted September 26, 2011 Author Share Posted September 26, 2011 I still Plan on working on the other images but have created two other images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acjwalker Posted September 27, 2011 Author Share Posted September 27, 2011 Final two views, then I intend on amending the images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krimson2580 Posted September 27, 2011 Share Posted September 27, 2011 did you do the grass with autograss? or did you use multiscatter? can you share us the settings of you're glass material it is really good. nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
polarbear Posted September 28, 2011 Share Posted September 28, 2011 Nice images...Really nice. I just have 2 things that really bother me. The fence around the roor terrace. It looks as if you can ran a car into it and it won't break. I think you should make it much slimmer so it looks more "light" ! The tiles on the roof terrace floor looks way too much like an image (your other textures are much better than that !)...Ow one more thing. The wood in the roof terrace view (one the flower beds) looks weird...it's too clean...where are the "knots" that usually are in wood..lack of structure in those boards..... BUT besides that...great images !!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acjwalker Posted September 29, 2011 Author Share Posted September 29, 2011 Cheers fpr the pointers, here are my first lot of amends. Is it too desaturated? I have removed the tree in the sky! Which one do you prefer of these two, with or with out lens flare, I prefer with out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acjwalker Posted September 30, 2011 Author Share Posted September 30, 2011 New Night Shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aristocratic3d Posted October 8, 2011 Share Posted October 8, 2011 I think the wood material has more than normal bump effect. that makes the wood awful. I like your render always. keep up the good work. specially your lighting is very realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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