JustinTuaylou Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 Studio/Institution: Justin Traylor Design VisualizationGenre: Residential InteriorSoftware: Maya, Vray, PSWebsite: http://www.jtraylor.comDescription: Hi, A few weeks ago I posted an exterior shot of a cabin in the woods, now this is an interior of the small living room. I'm looking for feedback, all comments are welcome. Thanks, Justin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xEndlessxUrbiax Posted October 26, 2011 Share Posted October 26, 2011 It's kind of a weird angle but just my opinion. The wall is slightly too blotchy and the fire looks face. There's some noise on the top part of the fireplace. There are some hot spots on your rug which seem out of place. The couch looks too high off the ground, maybe because of the angle of the camera. The couch and pillows look great but upon further look, it seems as if the couch isn't very deep compared to the size of the pillow... not sure. The background and the picture frame are very well done and the wood floor and rug look really nice too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustinTuaylou Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 Thanks for your reply. Does anyone else have any comments for me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmrodrigo Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 there is no weird angles in doing some shots it is the way on expressing on it ... nice good start my friend.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JustinTuaylou Posted October 28, 2011 Author Share Posted October 28, 2011 Thank you, I appreciate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cristian Neagu Posted October 28, 2011 Share Posted October 28, 2011 Great start, add some pillows on the floor will make it more cozy . GJ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satishjogi Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 Not bad, what might help is work more on the yellow cushion. Make it more 'stiff' and thicker, resting on the side arm properly. Also define better the portrait hanging on the wall.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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