Sourpickles Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Studio/Institution: SelfClient: SelfGenre: Residential ExteriorSoftware: 3DS MaxWebsite: http://www.jasonarts.comDescription: Started work on another piece for my portfolio to go along with that apartment complex. Been working on the two simultaneously for the most part. Still have a bit of texturing to do and need to add a few more props to the scene before I do a final full rez render and start my composite. Like I mentioned in the other thread do your worst! I love to learn so if you have and C&C I'm ready to listen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
satishjogi Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 Jason, so far so good, and as you said, still need to add your textures in For now, i think for the angle, maybe bring it up a bit higher so we get the see the water in the jacuzzi? S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 OK been super busy so wanted to get my update on here finally. I am about ready I think to render out a nice high rez image to photoshop. I'm not sure what I want to do with the window though.... Should I put an image outside or show I just use a bright bloom of pure white? Anyways I rendered this out on basic render settings and fairly low rez. [ATTACH=CONFIG]46014[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janwalli Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 often I am fine with a "bloomy white", as this is what you often get when photographing too. But - from this POV the window has such a prominent place and takes up a lot of "pixel-area". So I would try to place something to brake up this area. Either inside, or outside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted December 9, 2011 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 OK did my render....did a few stupid things during it which made it take foooorreeevvvveeerr to render that I don't want to mention lol In any case here is my pure render. I'm going to start fixing her up this weekend if I can find some time so I hope to have it done in about a week or so! [ATTACH=CONFIG]46062[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 your camera wide angle is a bit too much for my taste and so is the dirt material giving those sharp edges Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonJohnson Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 um.... the "dirt"? you mean ambient occlusion...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 Here is where I am at after about 1 1/2 hours of fiddling inside PhotoShop.... [ATTACH=CONFIG]46074[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AubreyM Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 Quite the improvement! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonJohnson Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 thanks man! my "cleanest" render so far too. That apartment just beat me down. I just need to learn how to build those outdoor scenes better. Indoor I think I got a good handle on. Glad you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red33 Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 (edited) Looks good! I would suggest easing the edge of the counter to get a realistic highlight and maybe adjusting the camera angle. It's tough to tell what's going on with the area in my opinion. Are you texturing things in Photoshop? Also, the window reflection in the mirror doesn't match. I would try to find a way to render the image with the background so you don't have to deal with post pro reflections. Edited December 12, 2011 by Red33 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonJohnson Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 yea i got a few things to fix up still such as that reflection and a piece or two.... what do you mean exactly by easing the edge? you mean the 90 degree angle? make it smoother? as far as the photoshop, i just adjust colors and levels. I did add the toothpaste texture in photoshop though haha and thanks! few more things and i'll have a nice new piece Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sourpickles Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 OK finished this guy up over the weekend and added it to my portfolio page. Need to start working on my Demo Reel for 2012.....ugh...hope I can find some work soon! Other wise just going to keep making portfolio pieces. Next I plan on doing some thing with foliage. I have a basic scene set up and waiting for a nice scattering of trees and grass...oooooooo...aaaaaaaaaaaa..... [ATTACH=CONFIG]46262[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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