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[Josh1587140445]

It has been awhile since I have posted anything. So here is a model that I just created for a competition.

 

So technically it is finished, but I would like to go back and add some things within the next couple of weeks. So any comments would be greatly apprietiated.

[Ricardo Eloy]

Well, Josh, I think the lighting deserves a bit more work. You have a nice model, but it looks like a miniature because of the lighting.

Also, the grass texture is that shipped with Max, huh? Change it for another, it's tiling like hell and is also too dark.

[Harjeet Singh]

just some artifacts otherwise good

regards

[Josh1587140445]

Well, Josh, I think the lighting deserves a bit more work. You have a nice model, but it looks like a miniature because of the lighting.

 

What would you suggest for the lighting. I would say that is my weakest point when it comes to rendering. I am working with VIZ 4 and Vrayfree and there is one single target directional.

 

Also, the grass texture is that shipped with Max, huh?

 

Yeah kind of it is a composite of a couple different ones.

 

 

Virses - What do you mean by artifacts? Add some entourage.

[Ricardo Eloy]

For exteriors, you don't need VRay. Try Delfoz's ring technique out and you'll get a lot more control over every aspect of the lighting.

What your image would benefit here (IMHO) is more contrast. Try a different sun angle to create a more dramatic set of shadows, giving the model more contrast and more volume.