Residential villa( night scene )

[cmrodrigo]

Studio/Institution: DG( SKEMA PIXELA)
Client: DGI
Genre: Residential Exterior
Software: 3d 09 vray
Description:

please comment i used an hdri my first time to use and first time to render a night scene

[neil poppleton]

Needs populating inside to help the visual.

[Jason Matthews]

There are a few things that don't quite do it for me. First is the angle. The angle of the camera makes the building look too flat. Try rotating a bit more to the left. Second is the forground. There is too much dark forground and no visual interest at all. Try moving the camera closer to the building and looking up. This will also allow for a more dramatic sky, but remember the thirds rule. Third, the bollards need to go. I don't know if it is the shape or the amount of light but something is very distracting. Lastly, add some entourage or something of interest to the interior and exterior. What is the story? Is it a dinner party or just some rich snob with no friends?

 

Keep going. I think this can turn into something pretty nice.

[cmrodrigo]

thanks neil for the comment i cant populate the scene with entourage my max will suddenly crushes down, so i need to do it in photoshop adding more trees, people.. thanks

[GezleR]

its not Clear that in the right side we have a pool ..

 

So you need to Change your water material . then its a good idea to use sear tree in the background in post production.

 

and in the last your interior Light is tooooooooooooo bright . its like a explosive House ;-)