showroom

[TESLO8639]

Studio/Institution: TESLO
Genre: Commercial Interior
Software: 3dsmax/vray
Description:

Design gallery rendering

 

Hello everyone , i'm new ,on the forums and kinda new in 3d .

 

this year in my school we have to create a space with 3dsmax+vray.

 

after few hours , setting etc ... i get that .

 

but now i don't know what to do .

 

i've bought some books to level up , but nothing best than an advice .

 

then could you hel me to improve it ? make it more realistic ..( compositing ?)

 

 

thanks everybody !

[Victor Erthal]

I think there are 3 important points to be made here:

1- i think you lighting is kinda everywhere. There does not seem to be a dominant light source or a logic on the light temperature on your scene. Keep in mind you are doing some art work and that you can bed reality a bit to please the eye. Try some options around like having a very dominant light coming from different sources by touring everything else off.

2-some colors are a bit jarring and not harmonizing very well with the rest of the tones in the scene. Again, you have artistic freedom, so try working on a mor harmonious pallette.

3- if you ca, you should give a shot at a different camera position. right now the space seems cluttered and you could benefit from a more organized view. take a look at famous architecture photographers and i am sure you will understand what i mean.

 

bon chance!

Edited November 25, 2011 by Victor Erthal

[TESLO8639]

ze by arthursloth, on Flickr

 

like that ?

[TESLO8639]

thaks for all your advices , i trieds this options , but seems unreal , then i would like nor an pleasant version but one which looks like as if i was in the room , maybe tou understand what i meant , i see your POV but i'm seaching something different ...

 

 

How could i reach that ??

 

http://forums.cgarchitect.com/68859-austris-cingulis-viscorbel-november-25-2011-a.html

[andstef]

In my opinion changing the render settings will not lead to a much better result, but you can improve the composition and the design of that room, for example you could make the ceiling more interesting ( http://theluxhome.com/banq-restaurant-interior-unique-design-ceiling-restaurant-by-office-da/restaurant-ceiling-design-corrugated-5/ ), it is a showroom after all, and the walls could be improved as well.

Also try to point the camera at something of interest in your room (desk area, entrance, some object in the showroom etc.), not "stare blankly" the link you posted is the best example for what i am trying to say, in every picture there is an element of interest (lamp, fireplace, window...).

 

I hope this helps.

 

good luck