RahulShaktawat Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 Studio/Institution: ilillussiontirupGenre: Commercial ExteriorSoftware: autodesk 3ds max and vryWebsite: http://illusionstip.comDescription: hello everyone this is my recent work corrections are welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janwalli Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 its a good start. For my taste some of the greens (foliage) are off. The windows look dead (relexion) and I think I would tweak the exposure a bit. Is there something planned for the left side of the path? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kippu Posted December 1, 2011 Share Posted December 1, 2011 the bushes are more interesting than the house which should not be the case Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RahulShaktawat Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 thanks kippu for yr reply i'll do the changes ...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RahulShaktawat Posted December 2, 2011 Author Share Posted December 2, 2011 thanks janwalli i do the corrections Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mario De Achadinha Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 Totally agree regarding the windows. You need some reflections to get some visual interest on those windows. Really like the foliage in-front! Overall good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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