night shot.

[rachel]

thank you for all the advice on how to do a night shot (night shot, Help!) you guys gave me last week.

I am finishing the night shot now and I was wondering if I could get some feed back about it please?

[kicks]

[jysngltndz]

i think the building should be a bit yellowish in relation to your sky..

[ipdesigner]

*i think, it's better to change the road map and add some bumps..

*there are some areas on the facade that are so bright!, you did'nt know where the lights come from..

*more entourage looks beeter also..e.g cars, people, trees

[chuck]

i feel that the overall scene is lacking because of the simplistic streetscape. you dont want the street and environment to take over, but as the building looks like its all alone sitting on a plane.

 

adding some more people (that are more visable too) and maybe some street lines would help it out.

 

hope it works out,

 

chuck

[Juan Altieri]

Overall looks good, i think you may decide if you want to make a afternoon or a nigth wiew, you need to get the exterior a little dark (if it's nigth) or the interiors (if it's afternoon) not too shine, i think the sky looks so brigth........

 

Good luck

[Dust to Dust]

i think that u need to change the background..