xanderakafonz Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Studio/Institution: NonClient: MyselfGenre: OtherSoftware: Maya vrayWebsite: http://www.anim-house.co.ukDescription: I think its almost finished, need to fix some of the floating papers and i thinking of adding an old timey "Fan" but i wanted some feedback before i open it up again, The suggestions when I posted the AO of this earlier in the week was to make one when it was submerged aswell... Not sure how i would go about creating the moss's and undersea affect :S but its something ive been thinking about doing, gathering resources and tutorials that might help. Let me know what you think ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AubreyM Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Nice job Alex, it looks really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n3CRO Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Good job, great atmosphere! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanderakafonz Posted December 4, 2011 Author Share Posted December 4, 2011 Thanks guys, can you suggest any improvements heh other than what ive said. If not ill go ahead and move it up a forum post and stick it in finished works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n3CRO Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Not much to crit, but if u want check out the thing below the wall lamp, strange relfection/bump thingy, Circular things on the right wall with needles could use some glass-like reflections and transparency so u can acctually see the needles and numbers I guess. I would also brighten up the whole image a bit. Maybe fill the left area with some old communication things just a touch for composition sakes. hmmm.. that's it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanderakafonz Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 thats what i wanted, given me something to do now before i move onto my next project Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n3CRO Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy L Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 thats what i wanted, given me something to do now before i move onto my next project Lovely soft lighting...but yes, do an underwater one! If its supposed to be the Titanic, then there's only one thing that really says titanic.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanderakafonz Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 I think id get in trouble for modelling Leonardo DiCaprio.. isnt his face copyrighted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tron Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Here's a way to go: brighter, more contrast, warmer tone mapping, increased intensity of light glares. [ATTACH=CONFIG]46032[/ATTACH] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xanderakafonz Posted December 7, 2011 Author Share Posted December 7, 2011 I agree man, Working on the chaged now, thrown the new render into phtoshop and i Upped all my setting to get a nice crystal 1080p res 200 pic, should be in the Finished works gallery soon. Thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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