One more new work.........

[ronitsharma.cool]

[ATTACH=CONFIG]46383[/ATTACH]Software: 3ds max 2011 vray 2.0, photoshop [ATTACH=CONFIG]46382[/ATTACH]

 

Hello guys this is my one more new work plz comment to improve more in this image:)

[RyderSK]

Hmm, two things stand out most to me.

 

1: Your laptop is flying.

2:Maybe you could post this in WIP section instead of spamming general section.

[410]

plz comment to improve more in this image:)

 

Hi Ronit,

 

First of all, good work so far. A couple of things really jumped out at me:

 

The texture on the bed has quite noticeable seams- try cloning out the seams on that texture a little bit in photoshop.

 

And what's up with that view from the window? Rock climbing- really? It doesn't look at all believable to me. But if this really is a mountain cabin on the edge of a cliff okay, but to my eyes the view still looks way too dark outside.

 

Take a look from your own window, the clouds (on a normal day) will always be brighter than the inside of the window frame. So you might want to increase the self-illumination on the image plane material. (Or if you're using vray, use a vray light material and dial up the multiplier).

 

Finally, there's something not quite right with the muntins either (the thin strips of wood or metal that separate the panes of glass in a window) they look really shadowed at the edges, which to me indicates that your exterior light source isn't placed or behaving correctly.

 

Anyway I don't mean to sound too harsh, I've tried to be constructive and I hope that helps.

Edited January 5, 2012 by 410
Apologies, didn't realise this is also in the WIP section.