tersite Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 Please comment these pictures. I need to improve the glass, asphalt and... ok, let's see what do you think. It's my design. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tersite Posted September 7, 2004 Author Share Posted September 7, 2004 Sorry...too many images I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marckie258 Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 hi! nice images... good design.. i know your client will be impress with this images that you post. are this done in Vray? MARK MAC Studio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 ok i like the design and ligthing, yo should work more on details, i like the minimalism in views, so adding at least a little detail (some person, some furniture, soome tree) shows the scale and makes the view looks better try to work in environment a lot and the images will look so great! Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tersite Posted September 7, 2004 Author Share Posted September 7, 2004 You're probably right, I need to put people on that. I'm not sure about furniture, i'm not looking for things that can move the attention from the architecture... but I know everything is too steady at the moment. What do you think of the skie? Thanks a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 i think for that image you need a more landscapping format, because i see lot of sky and a lot of grass, the architecture looks so far........ about the sky i like it, so clean and desaturate......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustav_gans Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 hi! i like the last image. but i think there should be some "environment hotspots" (like a group of people on special points). this would give the image more scale. i would also try some other skies (maybe some cloudy). a little framing would be nice too. anyway nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salf Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 get rid of those pipes coming out of teh floor sides. If those are rain water drain pipes, you should either hide them or use a long pipe from the upper floor going down (industrial type of looking, but doesnt fits your design, so better hide them), but not like you have it now, it ruins the whole building, looks like poorly designed or built. other than that ,great images, congrats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ipdesigner Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 *share the settings of the floor pls, on the second image..im using radiosity. *keep posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donix Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 nice rendering dude but i think your composition is not good. too much angles of camera but your not getting the right angle. your design is good but what i am saying is that give to your scene dude. give some emphasis... some focal point... improve background and foreground. put some life on it. (hope you take this as a constructive crits) keep on posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xgarcia Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 your floor looks like wax....needs more reflection and less blurry. Nice job. Did you design this yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jysngltndz Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 You're probably right, I need to put people on that. I'm not sure about furniture, i'm not looking for things that can move the attention from the architecture... but I know everything is too steady at the moment. What do you think of the skie? lighting is quite good.. some backgrounds, shurbs dnt keep it empty.. i would also suggest for some furnitures..."furnitures cannot move away the attention from architecture if your architecture is strong"...and i think your architecture is strong.. when this building will be built this will never be empty,placement of furnitures can give more life to your interiors & your client will surely appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tersite Posted September 9, 2004 Author Share Posted September 9, 2004 Thank you all, I'm working on new images of the school and i'll post them as soon as possible. I'm trying to improve them considering your crits. I don't like those flat and coloured rpc people to put on it, what do you think about giving them the same color and a bit trasparent looking? I guess is quite usual, isn't it? I'm trying a different skie. I've a model in 3dsmax of 100mb and so i've to be careful adding things cause my pc is getting slower and slower. those shots were just a test and so I hope to improve the camera angles soon...but any suggestion how to do it? Thanks, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim Mann Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 More (architectural) detail and better glass material will really help. Get the building right before all the landscaping, people and furniture. Really nice materials and lighting though! Jim Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tersite Posted September 13, 2004 Author Share Posted September 13, 2004 What do you think about the two glass materials. The darker one is the egzglass for vray. What do you think adding rpc monocromatic people. The coloured ones I guess are too flat for the scene. Please help me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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